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3 Stars IFReview Rating The Atomic Heart

IFReviewed by Jacqueline A. Lott on 2006-07-21 07:29 

Game Profile

Author
Stefan Blixt

Idiom
English

Authoring System
Inform6

Release Year
2003

IFR Overall Rating
4 Stars IFR Overall Rating
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The writing seems a bit awkward, forced, with occasional grammar problems and poor descriptions. "Object x is here, object y is there, and over there is object z. There, I think I've listed everything without too much of an attempt at being interesting."

Some crazy little implementation problems exist. >X BOTTLES returns, "You can't use multiple objects with that verb." >X BOTTLE returns, "Which do you mean, the eighteenth century bottle or the eighteenth century bottle?" "18th" is not a recognized synonym for "eighteenth." And, finally, >X EIGHTEENTH CENTURY BOTTLE returns, "Which do you mean, the eighteenth century bottle or the eighteenth century bottle?"

While the non-conventional plot and PC were a decent starting point, implementation problems and lack of imaginative writing made me drop the game rather quickly. Also, what kind of a name is Mr. Luvya?

Jacqueline A. Lott Profile

Name Jacqueline A. Lott
Gender Female

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